Those damn shadows.... I feel each word you've written and just know that you can overcome those damn things, it takes time, but don't give up, you will one day claim victory!

Simply amazing. The length has no negative affects, as the great power is consistent throughout. =DD

Wow... I love this!
Excellently written poem, filled with amount of truly vivid and powerful descriptions that created original images in my mind. Every stanza is so effective, and the ending is great- it rounds up the whole poem fantastically.
I like your choice of words from the beginning to the end, and the flow is flawless in each stanza.
Amazingly done!
Keep writing :)