Infused Thoughts...

by Simple Sensation   Jan 21, 2008


Infuse your thoughts
Into my warped mind;
And together, we are one.

Let crimson strokes cover it all
Perfection has a draining price;
But we are together, we are one.

And you make me ignore it all
You always win when we fight;
You are a part of me. We are one.

And now I don’t know what defines me
And without you, I see myself as nobody;
Because together. We are one.

You infused your thoughts
Into this warped mind
And together, we are now one.

Simple Sensation
21 January 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Amazing. Simply amazing.

    "And now I don't know what defines me
    And without you, I see myself as nobody;
    Because together. We are one."

    ^ I absolutely love this stanza. It was so unique and creative.

    As the writer, I'm sure this poem was talking about something in specific for you, but as I was reading, it made me relate to some things as well. Which is why I love it - It allowed me to think. (: Also, I love how you slightly altered the 1st stanza at the end. Creative thinking. ;) Overall: 5.5

    - Steph. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Absolutely loved it.

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