A short poem. but very inspiring. makes me want to just go sit in the sun and relax.
good write.
keep it up, would love to read more.

5/5

Ohh it was short but meaningful...the words seems really true and very appreciated nice start !
just keep it up and keep on writing..5/5

I like how your first poem is about nature. Very unique. The setting was also very descriptive. Short poem, but I must say very cute!

-tia

Life is always better than w think, other wise, we would not be here. Great poem. 5/5

WOW!!!! I really liked this, it made me feel like life isnt really all bad ... although most of the time i feel like it is all bad ... great read... when your big and famous, remember I loved ya poem!!! lol

I have to say, i think you captured the essence of a summer morning. beautiful