Hi Nuh,

Awesome poem! It was well penned. Great imagery. I liked the structure and tone.
The tone was written clearly, I loved it! Incredible diction as well.

Significant ending, which was truly unpredictable 5/5.

Your friend,

Sarah ^_^

Aww!!..terribly sweet!

What if?...that is just the question....i think sometimes we just need to take risks.
Hmm..i need to take my own advice...

anyways i liked this poem, good job!

done counting your keyboard keys?..lol

Aly