Comments : I wish... (reflection)

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    My sweet boy,

    We have been friends for so long now.
    It hurts me so much to see that you still feel this down at times.
    Please remember I will always be there for you. I will never abandon you, I love you.
    You are my sweetest friend ever!
    *hugs your tight*


  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a very sad reflection. Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Domino0792


    Great read, amazing flow, overwhelming emotion. You really are an amazing poet, short n sweet.

    Look, i know we are probably fighting and stuff. But this is silly. we are always fighting and seriously its over petty stuff, most of it comes off me i know. but you said it yourself you get upset easily and i only mentioned another guy and next thing i know we are fighting. I know you're concerned bout his age and mine, but it isnt really bout his age? is it? Im still your gal, your pal, someone close ... but when you snap at something good in my life, it makes me feel bad bout myself and worse makes me second guess my decisions. And thats a bad habit to start at 16. I shouldnt be second guessing myself. I would text you but out of anger i deleted your number. So who knows if you care bout this, but this is my only means of apologising.

    Remember one thing though. Not everyone is perfect, and i am definately VERY far from being perfect. When i am happy, i tend not to worry bout other ppl's feelings. Bad habit i know, im trying to correct it, its taking time ...


  • 10 years ago

    by Sarah

    OmG! This is a very heartrending reflection, David. Your written it so well.