Comments : How To Write a Sad Poem

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Sad, but maybe one day she will fall for you, or unfortunatly it's just not meant to be, but this was good, liked this part alot:
    Writing a sad poem
    Before you pick your pen
    you need an open wound
    Broken heart that you can't mend

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Jake called me about two minutes before i read this...lovely timing, of course....it's a very sad poem, jesse. and very true towards how i know you feel...and how i feel. great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, very true poem. excet the part were it said it's not true 4 u, u can't predict the future and u got 2 stop dwelling on the past. just live in the moments! cause that's all u have that u can change. 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 15 years ago

    by Joy

    This is beautiful.