Excellent poem.i could feel the pain in ur heart.I wish and pray god to help you overcome all your obstacles and provide you with enough strength to keep going.dont worry.hang on.everything is going to be alright.

This was a amazing poem indeed. you pain n the struggle what ur madre did n see all the hard word crash down befor ur eyes. but you can give up on ur family. even when it gets hard u gotta keep on trying. even wen all hope is lost u still gotta go. i realie like it. nicely done.
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy