Even though there's a gender difference I know that feeling. Especially the tears not from pain. Sadness or relief but not pain. Pain is the least of the evils.

I really enjoy your darker poetry the most. A lot of emotion and the flow comes across really well. I look forward to more pieces like this, it is wonderful.

In some places it didn't flow but that aside the message wad beautiful and powerful to put a punch in the end so that covered the nonflow of the poem quite well 5/5

-Onyx

That first stanza I can truly relate too. This poem is very well written. I love the raw emotions that are throughout it.

Thats deep. Kind of how I feel...

Woww! Amazing i felt every emotion to this poem as well your a good writer keep up the good work

This is well written. It gets more sorrowful as you read each stanza and you got the perfect ending. Good job!

Life is wonderful if you'll try to see the beauty in it. Cheers!!! God bless you!