I think a lot of people will connect to the poem. There are a couple of things to point out that I've seen in a lotof other poems lately. The capital letters at the startof each stanza and no punctuation. It takes away the flow but that's just me. :).

I loved the message of the poem here because I can relate well. You did a good job to capture the feelings of depression inside the person who is suffering. The story is really good because it doesn't seem to stray from the main objection of sadness overall. I do not however like the title much because I don't think the poem is about suicide per se, it's more about the feelings that make you think about suicide. The wording of like cutting and sadness makes you relaese that pain and to me thats where you should target the title. But good poem overall!

Sorry u feel that way but its a great poem....