Comments : Here i sit all alone

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    I'm sorry to read this as it is a sad poem expressing much pain and suffering, and as though it is sad it's good to get it out onto paper or well internet..

    You must rise above it all and stay strong, live how you want to live.. and always dream as big as you want.

    The graphic nature of this poem was really profound and captured my emotions deep wishing I could help somehow. You've really put together an outcry of such hurt it is a artistic poem with rough edges, I mean that is a good way.

    Really gave the reader a image to piece the poem together freely and seamlessly.. Also the way you wrote it was a way that the reader could envision and feel what you are feeling.

    Nice job, stay strong.

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Heart rendering write .You have poured your heart out in this sad write.
    These bitter experiences of life can be used as a springboard and you are a strong girl .Believe in yourself and bounce back and live your life to the fullest.