Winter is always great to compare to cold feelings, as in depression or sadness because it works well with the wording to capture the piece you are writing. There used to be a bright light, which I think was the person you loved in your life and now all that space is filled with is winter cold. This depression is griping at you and as much as you try to fight, you cannot shake it off. And right now it is all that you are feeling. This piece is great because it does not stray from the message you are trying to send. 5/5

Wow This poem... It just blew me away. It describes the meotions swirly around in me... And comapring it to the coldness and nothingness of winter.. Perfection at its best!!!!