Self cutting is something really painful but the things that make us do it are even more painful! Nice poem.

I'm a believer that we must let blood flow, however, not out of our bodies. We need it to oxygenize ourselves. We need it for nutrients to be transported into our body <- This is in reply to the content of the poem.

As far as the rhymes and structure of the poem, I find that they good.

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