~I don't she thinks she thinks of it as bad

>>> I don't think she thinks of it as bad,

Great read, thank you for sharing.

I don't this is bad at all but for those who do not speak Spanish please put a translation just a hint of advise. I mean I could read it easily since I'm Hispanic but not everybody knows how to read a foreign language.

To the story it's amazing how people in a culture does not understand the people within their own families and it's really sad.

I actually kind of like that there is no translation. This reads to me as spoken word, and the fact that there isn't one just gives it a more raw, personal feeling.

When you revealed what it was that you were looking for in those women I felt sort of overcome with a sense of sadnessn and anger. I think because to an extent, I can relate. Usually a young girl is going around with different men because she never had that father figure, but it's completely different in this case. She was there, but not in the way she's supposed to. And that really is sad.

Just a couple of things- the H in muher/es and pahara should be J. Mujer/es and pajara.
Also, "I do noT tell her that I discover women..."
and "let go off" should be "let go of".

I'm glad this made it to the front page. Congrats on the win!

Weekly Contest May 25th
Judging comment:

A poem that speaks without need for similes, metaphors, or complicated kind of imagery. A poem of genuine, raw and very deep concept.
A beautiful introduction and use of different language recognized in the first part of the piece, it added a touch of reality and personified the thoughts of the main character. Shifting into the second part which was easier to tell, the writer stated in few lines the reasons of her agony, still leaving more space to the reader to ponder upon her last words and search for truth lost between a mother and a daughter. More than fantastic read.