Oh God, I hope this ain't true cause if it is it broke my heart! :/ Man life ain't fair and this probably true to some person in the world right about now. It's sad that a girlfriend walks away because of how a person is horribly broken inside because of what he has seen instead of staying because she loves the person, but no in this poem the girl had a crush on your friend and that's just wrong, just way wrong.

This poem flowed all the way down, made you feel for the person in the poem (which is so sad, so it's in the right section), and took you on a journey that makes you want to weep.

Great job my friend 5/5

- Moria Bella Bair -