Comments : Just an act

  • 8 years ago

    by A dust in the air

    I love this poem...

  • 8 years ago

    by Claire Morris

    I really like it very much.
    'The heart they dug up isn't growing back'
    This line is my favourite.

    'they make you and than they let you fall
    they break you and than they all laugh'
    ^here, in these lines, it will be 'then' instead of 'than'.
    'they see you, heartbroken and sad
    but those who were once your friends just walk past'
    So true...

    • 8 years ago

      by arsalan

      Thank you for pointing out my mistake to me, I corrected it :).