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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An honest and moving piece, Patrick and well written. I particularly like the first stanza - great imagery.
    All the best
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    "The poet has died in me". I like that and most artists feel like that from time to time. A true artist never really loses his passion.Thank you for sharing and being so honest