Comments : Burning

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Saffie,

    It's so disappointing when a loved one trample carelessly over our vulnerability. You have used some great similes to Inject how it must feel to some extent for you. Words sometimes are not enough.

    BTW. A typo in the last verse.

    Good work.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Love is such a fragile thing and once you get burned by it, its hard to come back to.