Comments : Close My Eyes

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Mia,

    There is no doubt at all that when we crave something desperately, we do all we can to convince ourselves that it's there, especially in the case of love. It's a bit of a rude awakening when we realise it was never quite what we thought it was.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I absolutely loved this.. So much emotion throughout, I guess many of us can relate to this.

    Those last two lines, powerful great imagery.

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Savannah Hunter

    Mia,
    This is so full of emotion.
    We often find ourselves in that kind of position,
    Where what we had with someone was great, but then things happen and we question the sanity of it all.
    I felt the heartbreak in this.
    Hugs.