there's no way I'd know, true, but I would figure it out, and if you left me tomorrow logan, or today, or anyday, i dont think i could live, i need you so much :( I would care so much if you died, ever..even if its when ur 81, i'll cry a million rivers, i love you so much, please don't ever leave me, i need you so badly...you're my everything <33 xxxx i love you

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

ps...good write, sad though...but still amazing as always xxxx

Sad poem, beautifully written though, really enjoyed reading it, even if it was really sad. Keep it up xxx

That is such a sad poem but I still love it. Even your short poems are good. They are better than mine.

Exellent very well done! Check out some of mine I am not good just write to get things off my mind and for fun. Thanx and keep writing!

i like dz poem ur good

o no logan dont tell me ur gona kill urself..lol! that poem was amzing and DUH i would be so f u c k i n g saaad:'( always remeber if u wanna talk im here !! 5 minutes away from ur house !!! lol
Take care,
E.

great poem......sometimes i feel the same way....Its hard...But that moment passes and i feel a little better. But always just a little...Your lucky to have someone like Mortalidaga, someone who really loves you (besides your friends and family)

**jazz**

I spend a lot of time thinking about that, not if you died (no offence) but if I died, what would happen then, and would anyone care....I think many people will find themselfes in that one...

Beautiful poem

Such a beautiful & sad poem. I really liked it.
Take care & God bless.

heart felt excellent

that was really deep i hope you stay strong
beatifully powerfull writing.
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5/5

wow this a really good..no doubt your an awesome writer 5/5

Unloved ♥

I think alot of people can relate to this.... I liked it, it was sad and touching and it's made me think about how important everything is to me so Thank You for that:) Anyways AMAZING poem. 5/5

This is so sad, you convey your emotions flawlessly! I could really feel your despair, keep it up~Holly

I think every one at times thinks exactly what you wrote. As a child I did, and as an adult I still do. I'm not a depressed person, as most people think if you write something like this, its just our emotions......Sometimes we are so elated with joy, and others we are just kinda down.....i know you are a very talented writer, because you make your feelings real, and the readers feel it also....Great job, please look at mine when you have time, Love ya Becky

Sad but though beautiful
I think becky drake says the truth, everybody's feels that way sometimes I think. Your poem is so full of emotions, I dont really know you But i'm sure that many people will care if you die, and they will noticed you're not here anymore. Don't make yourself down Try to stay positive. I know how hard it can be. 5/5 for sure.

Very sad poem, i absolutely felt sadness. this poem is great and i know u write very, the flow was good.4/9

god bless

I loved that i felt the same once but the poem didnt seem right to me but u make urs work great.
comment mine plz see ya