Comments - Cold, Hard, Stick Thin Truth

XxCrazy4youxX ( F P C ) at 2005-12-17

~*Really great work, I've never went threw this but i've seen people who do, and it is a very scary thing to watch but yea well writen keep it up*~ XoXo

lisa ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-17

Wow, that is an exellent poem. it tells people that an eating disorder could really hurt you. keep up the good work!
*lisa*


Russell ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-18

I also people that went through this.You took the emotion from it very well.It is really hard to see someone go through something like this...your good writter..keep up the good work

Jason Meres ( F C D ) at 2005-12-19

Powerfully captured from your position, an engaging style with near-perfect wording. Very well done indeed.

Sammi Morris ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-22

It is really hard to put down in words but you've done it beautifully! you are an honest writer and that is an amazing trait! good work!

sammi morris

Bleeding Mascara ( F C ) at 2006-01-06

Wow this poem is really sad uve made a strong point and im surprised i thought only an ex annamia cood write like this its like u studied it for year ur words are so specific its like a book bravo

The Illicit Dollâ„¢ ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-17

Hey mah fellow kiwi!
love ths line: "in clothes that were once her size" the rhyming works for this poem, i like it! the opening line is also god, its simple but introduces the poem well


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