I love this poem thanks for the comment on mine!

Hey good poem, i think however if he loves you he should show you he does! you deserve to be treated like a princess and he should, if you think he could treat you better i think you know your answer, i hope all is well for you xxxxxxxxxx take kare honey xxxxxxxxx

Wow, is this based on a real life experience because it feels absolutely genuine. It's really sophisticated and I know exactly where you're coming from with it, I think to many of us have experienced something like this. Well done, great poem and thanks for the comment on mine :)

In answer to your question ,you should go..if you ever have to ask yourself that, the answer is clear..
great work

Cool, nice poem if this is a real life situation i believe you to be hasty and irrational, know for sure. nice poem

Oh yeah, its true action speak louder than words, but words speak things that are deeper. remember that and if you trully love him youll have faith in him.

Thanks for your comment.
please try and be more original with your poems. mor epeople would be more interested if love poems werent always about the same thing.

anyways 4.5

I love it 5/5

Interesting combinations in your lines, i like your idea, and structure of writing, well done xox lithium

Ii LYK DiiZ POEM ii CUD RELATE 2 iiT A LOT. ND THANXSZ FO DA COMMENT ON MA POEM LOLSZ TAKE KARE =)

This poem is so ggod keep it up :)

This is a good poem
you deserve to be treated right.
he shouldnt be treating you badly
guys r not always nice plain and simple
some r sweet but their isnt to many
if hes going to treat yu the way it seems he isnt then he isnt even worth your time
and you ending up getting heartbroken.
very good poem though.
keep it up hun.

Ashleyy

Good poem. You written out exactly what u feeling... I felt like it was a little bit forced but overall a great poem. I hope things work out good for you. Keep up the great work!

I like this, this is really good. I feel that you have expressed your feelings well. I have the exact problem. :(

I really like this!!

I can relate; very well done.

Nice indeed this poem is so much like my life except that i'm the guy and the girl was making me ask myself that not the other way around lol but alas thanks for leaving a comment i thought i'd return the favour

Nice indeed this poem is so much like my life except that i'm the guy and the girl was making me ask myself that not the other way around lol but alas thanks for leaving a comment i thought i'd return the favour

I like that poem did u go through diz or u jus thought of it and wrote it? But good job

Wow..ive never read a poem that i can relate to so much.. your very talented an thank u for my comments i will continue to write as well as you should.