Comments : Why

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Congratulations on a wonderful poem! I can relate to it so much! 5/5!
    Keep up the good work!
    .x

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Your poems is almost flawless. I mean Its very beautiful but still there is room for improvement. I loved your word choice and liked the flow. The word "you" in the last stanzas might be a mistake or else you might have deliberately written it for emphasis. Then its ok. U need to vote, to get a vote. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jas

    I really like this poem keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Robin

    Wow that is such an amazing poem. I can relate completely, and you really put some power into this one. 5/5 for sure.
    <3Robin

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    I loved this poem.... the words in each stanza flowed so nicely with each other, and there was definitly power in it.... i would defintily give it a 5/5 for sure, and thank you so much for the comment, it is appreciated :]