One for One Swap

Hello there! It has been almost 10 years since I've joined this site and posted my first poem. I went through a writer's block about 6 years ago, and haven't been able to produce anything of value during that period. It has been about that long since I've been on here, as well, and I miss it dearly.

I would like to reconnect with the members here, both new and old, as I have fond memories of this place. It is for that purpose I will give you an in-depth review on a poem of your choice in return for a comprehensive review on my first poem in nearly 6 years. It is a sad poem, and I understand it is not the most eloquently written, but it is a start. My hope is that writing poetry will be like riding a bike. I have a car now, and haven't ridden a bike in years-- but though the first few moments back on a bike may be shaky, I will re-acclimate (this is not a word, but it is now!) myself in no time.

To participate, please leave the link of your poem in this post, and I will cross-reference it with your review on my poem.

Thank you for my time! The link for the poem I would like reviewed is below:

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1240317

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IdTakeABulletForYou
(Stephen)

Done =) very good write after 6 years!

Here's a link for you

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1206531

I will be reading your poem tonight when I get to work and can be on a computer; about 3-4 hours from now :-) Thank you for your detailed constructive criticism-- I made changes per your suggestion, and believe it is for the better. Many thanks, and I look forward to reading your poem!

Done! And it was a great read my friend.