I could almost see it as it was happening. Wow! I hope this didn't really happen to someone you knew because it is so aweful but it was written so well. Well done, I look forward to reading more from you ...

xxx Kim xxx

This poem was beautiful. The imagery was amazing, very detailed and yet the rhythm was so smooth. I loved it. I hope you keep writing with such emotion. I only hope you realize people do love and care about you no matter what we think sometimes. I've felt this way often, so I'm here to talk if you need a friend.
<3Raych

Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Very nice write!!

Gosh so sad =(

Beautifully written!

5/5!

*Melody*

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I really loved this poem. It was written so well. I loved the flow and your sytle is so simple that it makes it easier to understand what you're saying. Very emotional. I loved it. Nice work. Shanik