Comments : Wrapped in Your Arms

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Just to note - in general I dislike love poems. I thought this was okay, until I read the last four lines, which saved the whole piece. They had a much better rhythm and story.

    Brad

  • 15 years ago

    by XAlwaysXBrokenX

    He i like this poem!! she sounds like a really nice girl!! umm yeah great poem 5/5