Comments : Serene Fate

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    This is a great poem i felt the emotion radiating out of it keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Young love is always so sweet.

    When I look in your eyes,
    I see all I can be,
    Everything I have ever wanted,
    My true destiny,

    I liked this stanza. Seeing yourself through someone elses eyes. Makes us feel special.
    Good job!
    Take Care Cindy