Ben
your talent always leaves me in awe. You can write about anything. The mark of a wonderful writer.
This is very dark and chilling. You have done an amazing job!

Walking down a dying path, shadow cast by midnight sun.
Exasperated soul lies deserted, torments favored son.

I love the ending stanza.
Excellent!
Love Mom

You are very talented. Although dark is not my favorite category, your poems are thought provoking and you have done an excellent job once again!

I thoroughly got lost reading this piece.Truth is, it somewhat captivated me.I loved all your other poems too.You write so well without giving away the obvious.I like that.