This was Koo. I kno how you feel too. That stanza about bein pissed was ill. 5/5 keep it up mayne.

This was Koo. I kno how you feel too. That stanza about bein pissed was ill. 5/5 keep it up mayne.

Wow i really like it but i think it goes a bit weird from the last line of the sixth stanza cos it doesnt flow all that well after - sorry! :-$ but otherwise it's seriously good! 4/5

Aww, i love it! the ending was just perfect! beautiful flow and choice of words! i wouldn't change a thing about it!! my favorite part was,
"Cause I'm not hurt or sad
nope I'm just pissed"
that was just perfect! 1,0000000/5 ;)
xoxo
~waiting~

Simply lovely. best poem yet. i loved the first adn last stanzas mostest!!! <3

Simply lovely. best poem yet. i loved the first adn last stanzas mostest!!! <3

Amazing poem, very buetiful, 5/5