Wow i like it

I liked it. it made me think a little bit which is nice and a plus since it didn't make me think too hard.

Creepy, cool ending! Nice rhyming too.

Em xXx

I liked it!! Oo I got a lil confused but I think I understand it!! I loved how you rhymed I have a thing with rhyming for some reason xD lol good work!! =]

I liked it!! Oo I got a lil confused but I think I understand it!! I loved how you rhymed I have a thing with rhyming for some reason xD lol good work!! =]

Very short and to the point.

i like it.

It's was good, I like it.

Sarah,

What a frightening story you have penned here! But it was well written, lol.

Take care,

XXIngrid

I don't know about this one, pretty deep. 5/5

I dont think it was confusing at all excellent job

Didnt really get it, maybe bcuz its not inplied wat it mean, but i likes lines
~I walk through a tunnel
Filled with darkness and gloom~