Comments : DECEMBER

  • 14 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    " hope my tears
    Fall down upon you
    So that all my fears
    Can become yours too"

    liked those lines more

    good poem with emtions

    hope everything is alright

  • 14 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent poem is "Everything is a discrace" suppose to be Everything is a disgrace

  • 14 years ago

    by Teria

    It's a good poem. Not your best, I think it could be broken up into stanzas. Some lines could be a bit longer, some are fine how they are. It needs work but it's a really good poem and you've definitely improved since Feb.

    Good write, though. A different emotion that usual. Which was kind of nice.