So amazing...it was very lovely!
you have outstanding talent..
keep writing so i can keep reading (=

So the beginning was really good, very well written and well thought out. the flow was great. But towards the middle/end the flow started getting a bit rocky. but besides that. great write. :] 5.5

I liked this one, but i agree with wilted. beginning was amazing, and the ending got a little iffy! sorry...i love ur other stuff tho!!!!

Wow! that's so wonderful!!!! it really is 1 of ur best!!!! it's flawless! it flows perfectly and makes my heart skip beats! 99999999999/5!!!
:P
xoxo
~waiting~

WOW!! I really loved this poem, and I mean REALLY! very well written! Deff. adding you to my fav. poet list. Keep it up 5/5. P.S. I'd love it if you read soem of my poems (preferibly my newest one "you're on my mind" please comment/rate. thansk so much!)
Rachel