Very beautiful and passionate, yet very sad.
Keep it up!
God Bless

Adel, little bro!

Such a sad poem by you! I am sure she will come back to you, don't lose hope my young friend!
(((big hugs)))

Ingrid

Enough already I can't take it anymore
Am dead already if this is what you ask for
Stop it please I have no power to strive
Am alive but dead, dead but alive

^ these lines were sooooo powerful... the whole poem was really well put together! great job!

Hey Adel,
this is a really great sad poem
i really loved this particular part

"So enough already I can't take it anymore
Am dead already if this is what you ask for
Stop it please I have no power to strive
Am alive but dead, dead but alive "

If u really love someone u shud never torture him

5/5

So sad*sniff*... i THINK this iz my favorite poems u have made so far. anyhow! absolutely awsomest poem. and do NOT give up if i have faith then so should u :P

Your poem tells me that she owns your heart, but treat it very bad. Some people don't learn how to cherish love until they loose it.. Sad and beautiful poem.

I rlly like this poem.. good job!!!

This is a brilliant poem, it flowed the choice of words....great 5/5