The descriptions and imagery was amazing. :] a very well written piece and the emotions were intense. this piece is unique and just. .outstanding.
"Rain sprinkles upon the forbidden ground
Sprouting the life where there was once dead
Hearts bloom to the songs of mating birds
But a path of darkness lies ahead"
-my favorite stanza. :] 5/5.

Oooo really like the title, and you used some great imagery here. Love the use of the word "blooming". Very effective,

Em xXx