I like how this poem starts out sad:

"And I can't help but cry myself to sleep,
When I lay in bed at night."

But by the end develops into something hopeful.

"Don't look so downcast.
Everything will be alright,
This kiss won't be our last. "

It's a sweet poem. I can tell that you really love the person since you're not willing to give up yet. Hope everything works out. Great poem! =]
--Viola

p.s. thanks for the comment on mine. :)

Awe. another beautiful poem. And again, the emotions expressed were very well done. This was well written and well thought out. :] the flow was flawless. And you ended it perfectly. :] 5/5.

Aw...beautiful ...amazing job on this one... flow was great and rhyming was on point..nice job.5/5

Short but sweet and it gets to the point also again another great poem

5/5

This was another great poem by you. you are truly talented............another 5/5

Aww. Its super cute. The spelling and grammer are very well writen. The rhyme scheme ties it together nicely. I do like it.