We live in this world and we walk in different ways but we find each other,
u give me every thing while i didn't ask any thing,u take my heart when u gently give me Ur heart

i like these the best the rest is kinda confusing

Thanks

I liked this. very sweet. although i reccommend changing the "u"'s to "you"
some people dont like spelling it as a letter.

5/5

Okay i will thz

Excellent...

Thz for ur comment

These lines are the best IMO: "We live in this world , and we walk in different ways, but we find each other, its dream to find you but dreams now come true."

This poem is really heartwarming. I really enjoyed it. Great job. 5/5

Wow, noha, this poem is really sweet, it is so touching.may allah bless you both.