Not your best...i was looking for the ending to just pop out...but it was just simple... but overall it was pretty good.4/5

Very beautifully written. you experssed your sorrow very nicely and I really like the repitition. It flowed nicely with the rest of the poem. The last four lines were definitely my favorite lines of all. :] 5/5.

It was short sweet yet to the point and was filled with power. Your thoughts were well expressed and I enjoyed the style in which you wrote in. Overall it was great read. Well done *5/5*