I LOVED this (very well written)! Risks really can benefit! <3

I reallllyy liked this poem, seriously man, it was like suspense to the max...

my favourite stanza was:

I run down the hall
Your name is all I manage to shout
You stop and look at me
Thinking I'm crazy without a doubt

lol... i can so relate to that... really nice short sentences and simple rhymes... thats the poetry i enjoy most of the time.. :)

I loved this poem...well done x its good to take risks sometimes :) x 5/5

Wow great poem, I can really relate. It's very sweet and cute haha!

5/5

awesome flow,

keep up the good work! :]

This poem caught my attention :]

I really like how you explained the details
in this piece it sounds like the first time i
had fallen :]

5/5

I lovee it! good climax, made me wish I could read faster.lol. 5/5 =]