Aww! This poem sent a shiver down my spine and brought tears to my eyes. It's so nice to read a break-up poem that isn't angry or depressing, I know I tried to write one and it didn't work out! Just one little thing that I thought would make it a tiny bit better:

"and a glint of sad in my eyes"

The word "sad" could be replaced with "sadness" to make that line flow a bit better.

But still an amazing poem. 5/5 from me!

Em xXx