So beautiful.
So divine.
So lovely
The poem had to rhyme.

~But I'll continue loving you every day
Because I remember the first day I saw those eyes
I fell absolutely head over heels
Now I know you were all wrapped in lies~

*This is so beautiful, it reminded me of something really important in my life*

Great choice of words, girl.

Very well poem. Keep writing! 5/5

Best wishes,

Sarah xx

This poem was so beautiful. I loved the way your emotions swayed, it wasn't simply one specific. I loved every line. Fantastic poem.
<3Raych