Good, Good
Keep Iit Up
X - - x

Tell him you love him and go N-E-X-T

Thsi was perfect except for the '4-ever'. why you would write such an incredible poem and then use abbreviations liek that is beyond me. The poem has great depth and meaning and such an emotive tone and it really is incredible.

I know how much pain and hurt you must have felt while writing this.... at the same time the way you were able to express yourself is great. I'm so sorry you had to go through this. After having lost him writing about it was the only thing that seemed to help. I hope you find your writing to be a way of relief for you as well. keep writing 5/5
kat

Wonderful poem, has a deep meaning and very expressive. good work