Great poem. thanks for commenting on mine too

Great write, beautiful flow. 5/5

A really, really nice poem. I like it a lot. I can't quite decide which stanza is my favorite between the third and forth, but they're both wonderful. Saying that, I really liked the opening and closing stanzas too. Ah, it's too hard, but I guess that's a good thing. I loved what was being said, and the way it was being said. I loved the structure and the flow, some of the rhymes I thought could have done with a bit more work, but the majority was great.

Brad

This poem is wonderful. its filled with so much honesty. sometimes you rly do need to follow your heart and even though doing so may break anothers heart, in the end, it's for the best. pretending to love someone will hurt them more than the truth. i couldn't agree more with everything in this poem. as well, i have a friend who is always thinking of others, but she never thinks of herself. or her own feelings. she should read this lol. ahh this was sooooo goood!!! 5/5

best part...

"So leave, if your heart is pushing you to go
Don't question the red flags that you know
Your mind is telling you to think this through
So leave, if she isn't the one for you"

just amazing.

Absolutely beautiful! Sums up the breakup I'm going through right now. Amazing job!

Lonely
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