This is a great poem. Keep on writing, you have amazing talent. Keep up the good work!!

Amazingg poem bby [:
i love it<3 it' sad and truee//
this explains what most of teens these days are going throunghh.

5/5 boo!

Hey dani yes i have a couple more up...comment them...tell people (if they any good) to comment them

because if i am ever going to get to a standard of writing even close to the standard of this poem you have wrote i need advice!!!!

hahah great poem i love how you write its one of my many cracks!

Wicked poem
pm me if u ever need 2 chat or nething
and keep writing!
:D

xx

I liked your poem. very well structured. And it has a nice flow too. It makes people interested to read through. Keep writing! :)