Comments : Their lips never touched.

  • 16 years ago

    by sweetlysimplyinlove

    That brought a tear to my eye, im sorry if thats true, i love the poem though

  • 16 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    My goodness.

    This poem is very heartfelt, very much so a inspiration. I really think this poem should have a 5/5 so I'm giving it to you Amirah [is that your real name? If it is it's a unique name.] I hope you keep writing, you can go far in life with this kind of writing.

    Good luck!

    -TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Very well written

  • 14 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Very Good poem.. Maybe you two will come closer together one day if it is meant to be... 5/5