Comments : Last Chance

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    5/5 i LOVEEEE it!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    This is so sad, specially after reading your profile. If your love is true between both of you it will be patient and wait. Hope you can continue to write such beautiful poems to help you out with the struggles along the way!!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    It was cute and sweet. And you have a good point. ^^

    <3 u hun!
    5/5!

    -Lizzi-

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    I can't imagine what you must be going through right now but I really hope that you and Ethan make it through this and that writing makes you feel a little better, I know it does for me. This is a great poem, the rhythm and flow were fantastic and I can tell it came straight from the heart. My favourite lines were:

    "I'm tired of smiling
    Because it's just a disguise"

    Good luck, 5/5

    Em xXx