That was good but somewhat confusing
i still got the message tho

try to add some seperation between different verses/thoughts/ etc.

other than that it was good! keep going

I liked this poem a lot. It has a good message per say and i loved the thought.
--Allie.

I thnk that book of your will be a best seller. Your poems are really hearfelt and are really easy to relate to. Never stop writing and never forget who you are!!!