its her poem.. it can have as many i's and me's as she wants.

Please don't confuse constructive critisism with rudeness Nae Nae. That's what this comments section is for. Luke is just being helpful and frank, and he is entitled to his opinion. :)

Syd knee: I found that it has a lot of I's and me's as well. It is not my intention to offend, just to help. I could use condtructive critisism like this on my poems. Overall the poem, theme, and message are excellent.
Continue writing and taking in true critisism, and you will go far .
Remember, its just someones opinion, you and only you have to decide whether your work is just right or not.
-Peace