I thought this was a lovely poem. I would have liked it to be longer. I would change the last verse slightly to help the rhythm;

'Go to a certain forrest one night
And you'll hear the Angel sing'

As it is,though, I still think it is great. 5/5

This was okay, but it would have been much better if you'd had made it a longer piece. I really wanted to read more. Maybe you should add a few stanzas.

Brad

Thanks for the advice. It helped.

Oooh, thought invoking.

I especially liked the 'like a baby at birth' as if suggesting, in my opinion, that she has entered a new life. Nice imagery overall, and a good command of emotive language, though I don't quite understand how you started with who I think is Lucifer and deviated to this girl? But that isn't a bad thing just a little 'oh huh?' doesn't detract from the poem.

All I can say is it doesn't QUITE read without jarring in some places, and the rhyming is mostly good though strenuous/a little forced in places, as far as lyrics go.

Anyway, very nice poem. :D Thanks for commenting on mine btw. Haha.

I thought that this
was a great poem
and I think that the first comment
was kind of right
but then again, rhyming isn't
the point of the poem
and in anyway your poem showed
true beauty and depth,
I've always had a thing
about angels so
was drawn in by the name
and am really glad that I read
this poem, I loved it!!
well done!!
***take care***

Like the Angels, we all have our own individual good and bad parts. Even the most devastating of circumstances can become just the "Angel Wings" we need to lift our spirits, like a blessing in disguise... C