Comments : Those days..

  • 16 years ago

    by Mariah

    Amen sister!
    pain is a reminder of something
    we know we will never do again.
    but it makes us who we are...

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Truthful poem girly!!!
    one suggestion: try to space your poem you know make it into stanza's it helps
    anyway 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by White Chocolate Dynamite

    Was this a free verse? Anyways u should put the poem in stanziac form. But yeah this was a very nice poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    I really liked the content of the poem, You're so right how we react to the negative things in our life has a lot to do with who we are.