I love this poem , its really , really good ,

I remember being there myself several years ago. I like the way you describe that gut wrenching feeling. Very good.

Nice

Really amazin one
keep on writing
5/5 :)

Omg.....i love this poem.........wow.......nice job.....

"The arms of your lover a vice around your breasts
Hard as stone fragile as a butterfly
A single touch would calm the giant
Safety and comfort for freedom
Hating yourself for loving Hating yourself for hating"

I would say...this part is the most delicious in your poem.

Nice poem indeed. It inspires me.. :P

Wow this is such a great poem.
i love it
great job
5/5