Comments : To weak

  • 16 years ago

    by Dani

    Haha supp matt!

    love the poem :D awesome stuff!
    and 4 that ill even rate you!
    haha where would u be without me!:P

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Interesting. there is a lot of dipair here. Very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    "To be a man one must be strong
    In mind, in body, in soul
    Therefore I am not a man"
    =>very excellent words, I like!!

    A mind cracked
    Roots of weeds holding me breaking me
    Sane madness consumes life
    Forever starving
    =>I like this structure you use

    "Less than man more than human
    An savage in a civilized body
    Trapped and tormented
    Freedom bound in rags"
    => This is really brilliant

    Well done...well done..